[You receive an ominous little message on your bracer that might have been intended for you? Or it might have been intended for someone else? It’s hard to say. But suddenly there's a "poem" for you to read with no explanation at all.]
I cannot help but stop and look at the creamy chocolate. Are you upset by how colored it is? Does it tear you apart to see the chocolate so chromatic?
I cannot help but stop and look at the tasty confectionary. Down, down, down into the darkness of the confectionary, Gently it goes - the tasteful, the mouth-watering, the savory.
The confectionery that's really cunning, Above all others is the candy. A candy is guileful. a candy is tricky, a candy is dodgy, however.
Don't believe that the chocolate is large? the chocolate is little beyond belief. Down, down, down into the darkness of your lips, Gently it goes - the insignificant, the mingy, the petite.
[The reply startles her somewhat! She can't quite remember sending it... And she can't really agree the poem is all that good. Did she really write this...? Gosh, her head hurts.]
Oh, I'm sorry. I'm not sure I meant for this to go to you...
But, not all poetry is about rhyming. There are several types that depend on other rules besides that.
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early january;
I cannot help but stop and look at the creamy chocolate.
Are you upset by how colored it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the chocolate so chromatic?
I cannot help but stop and look at the tasty confectionary.
Down, down, down into the darkness of the confectionary,
Gently it goes - the tasteful, the mouth-watering, the savory.
The confectionery that's really cunning,
Above all others is the candy.
A candy is guileful. a candy is tricky,
a candy is dodgy, however.
Don't believe that the chocolate is large?
the chocolate is little beyond belief.
Down, down, down into the darkness of your lips,
Gently it goes - the insignificant, the mingy, the petite.
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except it doesn't rhyme!! 😂😂😂
[ maya is a tastless bumpkin who doesn't understand how poetry works ]
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Oh, I'm sorry. I'm not sure I meant for this to go to you...
But, not all poetry is about rhyming. There are several types that depend on other rules besides that.